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WIP: Trouble at Fluttershy's by elegantmisreader WIP: Trouble at Fluttershy's by elegantmisreader
Still in a very rough stage. I'll be fixing things compositionally, aspect-ratio wise, and stylistically. Critiques strongly encouraged.

Drawn for the r/mlpdrawingschool 9th biweekly challenge, incorporating movement into a composition, including suggesting movement with the background.
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Cheezy805 Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh, also, the longer I stare at her eyes, the creepier they seem to get...
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Cheezy805 Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
1) The carrot looks like it's on fire, maybe just try simple motion lines, not a motion blur effect,
2) That mark on Fluttershy's flank... is it to show wind? To show that she's moving? A finger smudge on the page? Please explain...
I'm not a professional art critic and I'm not good at drawing at all, but you requested critiques, so... there.
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elegantmisreader Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
1) It was just one suggestion for adding "I am being thrown". I'm still playing around with that, and you're right, it DOES look like it's on fire...

2) I'm trying to add tears. It'll probably look better once I've fixed the stylistic stuff, but it's useful to hear that it's not reading well.
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Cheezy805 Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ahh, right, tears. Well, I'm sure making them blue- despite not being realistic- would make them appear more... tear-like.
I look forward to the finished version; it already looks pretty good! Way better than anything I could do, haha!
I'll stick to writing, eh?
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Kittylove39 Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2012
Awww its cute!!!

I'm not a professional artist, so others will have to advise you.

Hehh I liked the episode though. Angel needs to be spanked sometimes.
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